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PostSubject: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Wed Jul 30, 2014 12:06 am

Name:Anna Reed

Nickname:monster

Age/Birthday:age,11/ birthday:December 13

Eyes:Golden Amber

Hair:Black but has 3 whit evenly spaced out lines on the left side of her head

Body Type:lean

Skin Type:white

Weight:102 pounds

Height:5'2 1/2

Personality:Anna is described as sweet kind and caring. She will fight we needed and is caring about her friends. Anna loves being out doors and she also has OCD. She can turn serious quickly. Anna loves outdoors.

Flaws:Anna's flaws is her OCD it gets in the way. Everything has to be symmetrical or she will have an OCD attack.
Can't hold a grudge because she always find ways to forget about it and stay calm. She also can't hold a grude because she was badly bullied, she doesn't want anything to hurt someone or herself.She let's her emotions get the best of her for example, she can get mad quickly and have trouble cooling down. Anna is very insecure about herself. She is very lazy to do something.

Talent:She can sing very well.

Typical Outfit:A black skirt, a shirt with long sleves, a black vest to go with it, and a skull tie.

Mortal Parent:Hailey Reed

God Parent:Hades

Place of Origin:America

Pets:A German Shepared mix with Terrier named Sasha (a new pet)

Powers:Shes uses guns and if she comes to a battle where this skill is needed she will use Death Cannon and it will destroy the monster in one shot. The Death Cannon can only be used one time a year because it takes up alot of energy to the point it can lead to death if you use it to long. She is skilled in boxing and tends to use it when fighting monsters. Her other power is to summon a death force she can do this at anytime but the time limt is 14 mintues before it goes away. The death shield takes 11 mintues before she can use it again she can create it only 2 times a day.The monster needs to be about the size of the neon lion to get knocked out by 3 hits, if it is bigger it will need to take more hits then 3. The death force makes a circular shield arround her and if the monster touches it can get knock out and she has an avantage to kill them. Anna can also communicate with the dead lost souls by using Necromancy .

History:Since Anna was little she always felt different being born in the 1920's. She didn't fit in no where even if she tried. Her mom was a nice lady but she pamperd Anna to much so she ran away. Anna wanted to see the world and not be blocked from it by her mom. while she was running away most of her time was spent in the Lotus Casino while time passed by. When she came out of the casino years had gone by. Anna's was taken to camp by a saytr telling her what all happened while she was at the Casino

RP Example:As i ran through the woods of my backyard looking for something new to discover.Ii saw a boy sitting on a tree stump. "Who are you? Why are you in my backyard?" I asked. He looked and turned to me. "Hello Anna. Im Jack. This is your backyard eh? Seems like a forest." Jack said. "Anna its ok he is here to help and take you to camp." Her mom told her gently. "Camp? What camp?" Anna asked getting confused. "Its a long story he will tell you on the way there." Her mom explained. Anna looked at the boy in disgust and walked to him. "Fix your hair its asymmetrical!" Anna told him fixing his hair.


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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:05 am

Hey Anna welcome to the site, mind expanding in your personality a tad bit more, and you only seem to have 1 flaw where as we require at least five.
As for your powers guns aren't exactly what we mean by it, yes they are powerful but it's no raising the dead.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Wed Jul 30, 2014 5:11 pm

i have edit my character form
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Wed Jul 30, 2014 5:15 pm

Are you willing to go along with the main plot and be active with a Hades character like this? If not, this form would be good if you changed it to Thanatos.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:28 am

Yes, I'm am willing to go with the main plot as a child of Hades.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:45 am

Alright, last thing I believe, I don't think you have five flaws. It seems you just explained the second flaw in depth.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:43 am

i have edited but i made a change to the talents.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:52 am

I am so sorry I keep missing little things, lol.

She needs a power limit for the death shield.

How does she speak to the dead?

I believe that every Big Three made an oath to have no more children, correct? So wouldn't she have to had a similar back story to Nico and Hazel, where she lived in a certain time, then was in the Underworld for so long, etc.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:08 pm

it edited :3
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:14 pm

Very nice, just a couple more things.

How many times a day can she create the death shield, and what is her cool-down time in between each usage? I think an hour at a time is too much, she'd be basically 'I can hurt you but you can't hurt me.' Please reduce it to 15-30 minutes or so, depending on how many times she can use it/her cool-down time, at a time.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:34 pm

i edited  bounce 
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:38 pm

Last two things, I'm 99% sure this time.

Is the dog a new pet? Because it would've died by now if she had it before she went into the Casino.

I don't think it'd be possibly for every monster to be knocked out by the death shield. So, you might want to edit in something about how the size effects how many hit it takes by the death shield before passing out.
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:47 pm

edited :3
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PostSubject: Re: AnnaTheKiller's characters   Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:59 pm

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